http://arcanum.forummotion.com/feed/? Latest topics Tue, 16 Mar 2010 22:48:56 GMT 10 http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c359/bajifishtar/imw.jpg http://arcanum.forummotion.com/feed/? http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/thoughts-on-the-future-t34.htm Fireraven Alright it's been a long while since I last wrote anything. I'm sorry I've been busy and haven't been able to keep up as well as I'd like to. I do have plans to continue the story but am currently dabbling with the character perspective and style in which I want to take this. I want to expand from Fireraven's perspective into the other characters. I'm not sure how I am going to do this but it will add length and depth to the work. The current idea is to add in other characters to telling the ... Writers Corner Tue, 16 Mar 2010 22:48:56 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/thoughts-on-the-future-t34.htm#188 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/thoughts-on-the-future-t34.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/solstices-revenge-a-work-in-progress-part-two-t12.htm solstice Rage does not even begin to describe the feelings Solstice is feeling when she is dropped from the talons of the Charonte Demon into a garden with high walls made of pink granite. The statues and benches are all a stark white marble that is glistening in the evening sun they look wonderful amid the lush green colors of the leaves and grass along with a sprinkling of an array of colors from the flowers. A nearby walkway covered in wisteria in full bloom commands the attention of Solstice’s sense ... The Official Story Mon, 23 Nov 2009 06:54:52 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/solstices-revenge-a-work-in-progress-part-two-t12.htm#56 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/solstices-revenge-a-work-in-progress-part-two-t12.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/the-private-journal-revisions-t33.htm Fireraven May 6, 2000 I can not explain why I am so suddenly compelled to write I have not picked up a journal in many years but perhaps time will tell as to the reason, if there be any, for this odd compulsion of mine. I should probably note that the American South West is one of the strangest places I have yet to be within the span of my life. Never since my days in Salem watching their infamous witch trials have I ever seen such a massive convergence of over zealous religious heretics. The hospitality ... The Official Story Thu, 04 Feb 2010 21:26:41 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/the-private-journal-revisions-t33.htm#182 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/the-private-journal-revisions-t33.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/poetry-between-fire-and-sol-t8.htm solstice Solstice is the Sun Fire comes from her He can burn you badly While the sun only warms you Solstice is the Goth Mother Spreading her wings and taking In all of the writers as her own Silently sending up good wishes On the winds along with love. Do you feel a warm south breeze? It came from Sols and carries Her love for her Son the Fire Warm wishes going up now for all who read our prose now lets do our poetry of old off the top of our heads let not our ... Writers Corner Sun, 22 Nov 2009 17:53:02 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/poetry-between-fire-and-sol-t8.htm#38 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/poetry-between-fire-and-sol-t8.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/meadows-of-heaven-t32.htm Fireraven That who I was yesterday
Eating away at my sin
All the secrets deep within
The thought passed by
That I might die
Causing sweeping changes
To pass through my ranges
Revamping the landscape
Into a new shape
As death settles
Unto my meadows
To drag me away
On my destined day
As the clock strikes eleven
In the meadows of heaven]]> Writers Corner Tue, 26 Jan 2010 07:56:08 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/meadows-of-heaven-t32.htm#179 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/meadows-of-heaven-t32.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/her-sin-an-original-story-by-sarah-smith-work-in-progress-t6.htm incoherently_FUMU Story and Characters copyright Sarah Smith 2009 Chapter 1, Part I There was never a time in which she was without him, although she never knew that he had ever been there anyway. For all of her eighteen years of life, she’d been followed by him. He was behind her, in front of her, by her side, wherever he could accommodate himself to get a full view of what was happening. Many of the things she said and did reminded him of himself when he was young and living, and when his focus was ... Writers Corner Fri, 20 Nov 2009 06:17:59 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/her-sin-an-original-story-by-sarah-smith-work-in-progress-t6.htm#29 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/her-sin-an-original-story-by-sarah-smith-work-in-progress-t6.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/story-comments-f7/comments-on-the-original-writers-stories-t30.htm solstice ]]> Story Comments Sat, 02 Jan 2010 01:22:18 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/story-comments-f7/comments-on-the-original-writers-stories-t30.htm#171 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/story-comments-f7/comments-on-the-original-writers-stories-t30.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/the-private-journal-of-fireraven-hollowheart-t1.htm Fireraven *Notes: Rough draft, will be edited.* Copyright John Barnett 2008-2009 May 6, 2000 I can not explain why I am so suddenly compelled to write I haven't picked up a journal in many years but perhaps time will tell as to the reason, if there be any, for this odd compulsion of mine. I should probably note that the American South West is one of the strangest places I have yet to be within the span of my life. Never since my days in Salem watching their infamous witch trials have ... The Official Story Tue, 17 Nov 2009 23:33:11 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/the-private-journal-of-fireraven-hollowheart-t1.htm#1 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/the-private-journal-of-fireraven-hollowheart-t1.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/fireraven-genesis-t29.htm Fireraven The sun was beginning its descent into the western sky setting the sky alight with vibrant red, pink and orange mixtures, dark clouds were rolling into the east seemingly fleeing the display of light, and a lone man stood on the hillside of the British countryside silently standing just outside the opening to a nearby cave. He was dressed in a weather worn hooded brown cloak pacing back and forth almost agitatedly staring back into the cave every now and again. This lapse only lasted for a brief ... The Official Story Wed, 30 Dec 2009 21:52:30 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/fireraven-genesis-t29.htm#169 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/fireraven-genesis-t29.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/seeds-of-evil-technically-part-of-the-official-story-very-undeveloped-t27.htm Fireraven A cold wind descended upon the desolate plain, brushing past a lone figure standing in a patch of burnt grass. Slowly the figure walked to the edge of the plain only to be stopped by what seemed to be an endless chain fence. Cautiously he looked through the fence into the ghetto of the largest city in the Greater Plains Region. Rotting garbage littered the street and rats hungering for something edible gnawed at the unconscious form of a burnt out drifter. Above this scene lay the balcony of ... Writers Corner Sun, 27 Dec 2009 07:58:45 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/seeds-of-evil-technically-part-of-the-official-story-very-undeveloped-t27.htm#167 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/seeds-of-evil-technically-part-of-the-official-story-very-undeveloped-t27.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/spear-of-longinus-t26.htm Fireraven The hot light of a lantern lit the floor as a young dark haired male of Germanic decent wearing a worn brown leather jacket, a dusty Indiana Jones style hat, a light brown shirt, and a worn pair of leather shoes entered a mysterious cave in southern Austria. His hair was oiled back and he walked in a prideful yet self disciplined manner. In one hand he firmly clutched a map with a solitary marking that read “The Chamber.” Coldly his steps echoed as he descended into the black depths of the ... Writers Corner Sun, 27 Dec 2009 07:57:03 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/spear-of-longinus-t26.htm#166 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/spear-of-longinus-t26.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/call-sign-topher-t25.htm Snitcakes Topher Topher's pod exploded open. He dove forward and took two quick shots at the first enemies in front of him. Two grunts fell from the first shot of his Battle Rifle, the triple shot spreading as he turned his weapon. The second brought down a sniper in one of the trees above. He quickly spun on his heel and ducked to the side as an Elite smashed at the ground where he stood only moments ago. The Elite turned toward him and bent lower, opening its mouth and roaring at him. He reached ... Writers Corner Sun, 20 Dec 2009 23:36:21 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/call-sign-topher-t25.htm#151 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/call-sign-topher-t25.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/i-ll-be-home-for-the-break-t24.htm Fireraven I won't be on until most likely early January because I don't have a laptop I'll. Keep in touch people I'll be using Yahoo mobile and my phone to keep in contact so call, text or im me with any info. Hopefully I'll have new content up shortly after the break. I've got material that I'm working on so it's looking hopeful. Cell: (405)694-0987 IM: bajifishtar (I would be using the fireraven_fss but my phone can't type in the _ so I can't log in to that one.) Chatter Box Wed, 16 Dec 2009 20:13:12 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/i-ll-be-home-for-the-break-t24.htm#148 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/i-ll-be-home-for-the-break-t24.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/new-banner-t15.htm Fireraven

What do you all think of the concept?]]> Chatter Box Tue, 24 Nov 2009 06:15:13 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/new-banner-t15.htm#90 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/new-banner-t15.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/chats-between-fire-and-sol-t23.htm Fireraven Important information is within these words. The entire thing is a spoiler. This is meant for Solstice, Snitcakes and I Copyright on all Immortal Wars content John Barnett, Janece Stiles, and Snitcakes 2001-2009 janece stiles: Bounce away on here I will answer whenever I can fireraven_fss: Ahh something called me back to my computer. I started writing an epic poem as a form of brainstorming earlier, what I have written was posted. janece stiles: I will check it out in the morning fireraven_fss: ... Creators Discussion Wed, 16 Dec 2009 07:53:16 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/chats-between-fire-and-sol-t23.htm#145 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/chats-between-fire-and-sol-t23.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/maybe-a-poem-for-the-journal-i-have-an-idea-for-it-t22.htm Fireraven Dreary clouds on a moonlit night Announce the coming of doom For the Stardust Clan May ravage the land Leaving chaos, a sign of their wake Yet there is one man In a pagan starred clan Who can battle for humanity's sake But with a shattered glass heart That was broken from the start Can he save the lands of man? Some time in the past A traitor had been cast The honor of destroying this man To take his compassion And reveal it to the sun Causing it to whither ... Writers Corner Wed, 16 Dec 2009 02:03:52 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/maybe-a-poem-for-the-journal-i-have-an-idea-for-it-t22.htm#144 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/maybe-a-poem-for-the-journal-i-have-an-idea-for-it-t22.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/the-time-line-t7.htm solstice Probably the most confusing part of reading all three stories is trying to figure out the timeline. I can bounce around you two and spin a tale in any direction but, now that this is becoming bigger I have readers asking me about when does my story occur? Conveniently the original work fits perfectly with the ending of part one since we know I had been unconscious for over two years. The war happened prior to my story. WARNING SPOILERS .... IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO KNOW THEN STOP READING RIGHT ... Creators Discussion Sun, 22 Nov 2009 17:02:55 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/the-time-line-t7.htm#37 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/the-time-line-t7.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/user-groups-t3.htm Fireraven
I can make open groups and guilds and such so just ask ^^]]> Chatter Box Wed, 18 Nov 2009 16:59:00 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/user-groups-t3.htm#11 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/user-groups-t3.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/character-relationship-histories-t17.htm Snitcakes This is a thread to fill in details behind characters' pasts and specify relationships between characters in this writing universe. Many of our authors' characters appear in each of our stories, and it would be helpful for the readers to know the backround information about these characters without needing to read every entry from each author to know why the character is acting the way they are. I will post a few histories myself as information and as examples of what kind of thing to post. These ... Creators Discussion Sat, 28 Nov 2009 07:52:55 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/character-relationship-histories-t17.htm#110 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/character-relationship-histories-t17.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/in-japan-card-games-are-the-only-law-t21.htm Fireraven Main Character: Shirow, Yatate Notes: In Japan most people are referred to by their last name, to keep with that tradition the same will be implemented. Part 1. "Alright! I've got this in the bag." Shirow looked pleased out onto the field. His life points stood at a total of fifteen hundred, just barely enough to pull of his next move. "You can't possibly win right now. I still have five thousand life points left and three monsters on the field." Yuki scoffed. ... Writers Corner Mon, 07 Dec 2009 18:58:48 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/in-japan-card-games-are-the-only-law-t21.htm#136 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/writers-corner-f2/in-japan-card-games-are-the-only-law-t21.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/become-our-fan-on-facebook-and-show-your-support-t20.htm Fireraven http://www.facebook.com/home.php?filter=pp#/pages/The-Private-Journal-of-Fireraven-Hollowheart/237357231280?ref=ts]]> Chatter Box Fri, 04 Dec 2009 18:43:50 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/become-our-fan-on-facebook-and-show-your-support-t20.htm#129 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/become-our-fan-on-facebook-and-show-your-support-t20.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/story-comments-f7/creation-story-not-so-much-a-spoiler-as-intricate-background-info-t13.htm Fireraven So to those of us who have read the creation myth for the series what are your thoughts? Concerns? Questions? It's all here for those who haven't and want to know. I would like comments though, a lot of this was originally based loosely on Celtic mythology hence the names and the Celtic pantheon being one of the first to be created. Spoiler: Eventually I want to detail how all the major pantheons were created but for now I only have vague ideas for the story structures of the ... Story Comments Mon, 23 Nov 2009 23:51:30 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/story-comments-f7/creation-story-not-so-much-a-spoiler-as-intricate-background-info-t13.htm#62 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/story-comments-f7/creation-story-not-so-much-a-spoiler-as-intricate-background-info-t13.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/welcome-to-the-community-t2.htm Fireraven
This is as much for me and my freedom of expression as you guys freedom of telling me wtf you think of my work including that it sucks or not lol.

Any ideas for expansion please do tell.]]> Chatter Box Wed, 18 Nov 2009 03:48:16 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/welcome-to-the-community-t2.htm#10 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/welcome-to-the-community-t2.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/recurring-character-sheets-t4.htm Fireraven This is a thread for characters that occur in more than one story and who are designed to reappear in multiple works. Name: Fireraven Hollowheart (Birthname discarded many years before turning) Age: Several hundred years old. Race: Vampire History: At one point was a druid in training in a clan in what is now Britain. Was turned after the calamity that occurred upon Hades' death. As a result he was exiled along with many other members of his clan. Eventually helped ... Creators Discussion Thu, 19 Nov 2009 22:44:56 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/recurring-character-sheets-t4.htm#27 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/recurring-character-sheets-t4.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/fauztin-a-man-of-two-races-t14.htm Snitcakes The beast’s body slid off the blade, falling limply to the ground. The dark, lean figure rose from his kill, wiping the blood from his weapon on his prey’s fur. He had slain a Lycan, the foulest of beasts of the night. A noise alerted the man from the north. He dashed through the trees and entered a clear meadow, the full moon and bright stars illuminating the area. Three figures lumbered across the field halfway across to the woods on the other side, where four more stood tall and broad ... The Official Story Tue, 24 Nov 2009 00:52:29 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/fauztin-a-man-of-two-races-t14.htm#68 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/fauztin-a-man-of-two-races-t14.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/basic-species-level-rules-history-creation-stories-etc-t9.htm Fireraven Alright I'm going to start with the basic species Hierarchy... Immortals -The original formations of energy in the universe. Very diverse in abilities, can only be killed by something else that has the potential not to die. When they do die the energy that allowed them not to die reforms as various gods and goddesses. Gods - Created by the death of an immortal or the mating of a god and a goddess. Can be killed by any means, but their bodies will reform in a human host and they ... Creators Discussion Mon, 23 Nov 2009 04:54:51 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/basic-species-level-rules-history-creation-stories-etc-t9.htm#42 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/basic-species-level-rules-history-creation-stories-etc-t9.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/solstices-story-part-one-t10.htm solstice Solstice found herself alone and cold and lusting for more blood. She could not understand it. Why does she not remember anything before yesterday??? She had killed for the first time and without knowing what she was doing let her victim's blood take over her feelings for a while and that is how she came to her second victim. The latter was a fair maiden from a nearby farm who was to receive a ring with a shiny stone in it from Solstice's first victim. All Solstice can see is red. She cannot ... The Official Story Mon, 23 Nov 2009 05:57:45 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/solstices-story-part-one-t10.htm#46 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/the-official-story-f1/solstices-story-part-one-t10.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/tidbits-from-solstice-t11.htm solstice here is the background on my blog that fireraven mentions at the beginning of my story. solstices black mood Current mood:scared Category: Writing and Poetry Most of the time Solstice is playful in her own mind but other people do not necessarily know how to take her. Sarcasm is the most fluid language she speaks and she has honed skills in making people look like idiots. most of the time she lets people do the talking in anger and lets that person making all the noise look stupid. ... Creators Discussion Mon, 23 Nov 2009 06:47:35 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/tidbits-from-solstice-t11.htm#54 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/creators-discussion-f8/tidbits-from-solstice-t11.htm http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/any-maga-comic-graphic-novel-artists-wanting-to-do-some-work-t5.htm Fireraven
PM me or reply here for more details.]]> Chatter Box Fri, 20 Nov 2009 01:20:41 GMT http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/any-maga-comic-graphic-novel-artists-wanting-to-do-some-work-t5.htm#28 http://arcanum.forummotion.com/chatter-box-f5/any-maga-comic-graphic-novel-artists-wanting-to-do-some-work-t5.htm